Thursday, June 5, 2008

Sonar's Poem

Swimming

Without air
Without care
I spread my arms
I swim away
Rock ahead
Ouch
Just me, Just water
My flock
With Echo
Mostly alone,
completely armed
Unafraid
The still water
splashing around us
calmly
Voracious.

--Sonar

Alright alright, so it is a big copy of Echo's; get over it. Mine is water because i like to swim( you didn't know that? guess what, now ya do)Echo LOVES to fly even with her wing annoying her.
Poor Echo.
One day I will find a way to fix that Echo. don't worry.
ROOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
sorry eraser part wanted to speak.

Fly on (Sonar style)

Sonar

1 comment:

Just Me said...

haha that was an interesting twist to my poem, but I likedd it. I don't know how you are going to fix my wing, but that would be nice. (I I KNOW it's YOUR flock but...nothing else really fit....so..leave me alone) lol

I didn;t know the eraser part was like...a SPLIT personality (ahemahem) lol

ECho